Hebuno, Naoko [Sailor Hurakan]

[Hebuno Naoko]

GIVE SADNESS A SAILOR SMILE

We don't want it anymore,
I believe that you can change it,
Even in the darkness.

BRING A MIRACLE, A SAILOR WING

Character Name: Hebuno Naoko
Name Meaning: Honest Child of Heaven
Senshi/Shitennou Name: Sailor Hurakan
Age: 16
Birthdate: June 1st

EVERYONE CARRIES A SHINING STAR

Personality: Naoko is very lively when she is with her friends. She has a good deal of energy that naturally flows through her. To anyone outside of her friends, she comes off as sneaky and kind of creepy. This little lady tends to keep everything about herself hush-hush. When it comes to meeting new people she's either very excited about it or acts very nervous (generally around good looking men).

You know those cheesy love novels your mom reads? That would be what Naoko reads. Even the smuttiest of novels can interest this young woman. Deep down inside she is a romantic, waiting to be let loose. Remember all those times you introduced yourself using ‘I like long walks on the beach’? Well, she literally means them. Thanks to these novels, she's become a bit of a pervert.

Naturally curious, Naoko will ask as many questions as possible. She tends to want to know the way the world works and why. With her curiosity she can even get herself into trouble, and does quite often. She knows no bounds and will ask any question that comes to mind. Naoko is one of those young ladies who gets labeled a ‘Social Butterfly’ quite often. She switches her sides depending on the topic and will go from friend to foe in a matter of seconds. She’s not one to stay to one side permanently. All of this is for the sake of learning and knowing more and more about the world and the people in it.

And, for the record, she doesn't know she's a senshi yet. She has no clue. Sailaor Hurakan has yet to bubble to the surface. However, with all the recent senshi action going on, she is starting to feel the pull of her otherself.

Physical Appearance: N/A
Strengths: Photogrpahy, Gathering information, Sneaking around, Researching, Keeping notes, Curiousity, and People Watching.
Weaknesses: Curiousity (bit too curious sometimes), No personal boundries, Stage-fright, Creepy (it does freak people out), and Daydreaming (she gets TOO into her daydreams).
Dreams: The typical 16-year-old girl, Naoko has no clue as to what she wants to do. She has no idea, none what so ever, to be perfectly honest about it. She’s debated being a surgeon, a news paper reporter, an anchorwoman, and a pilot. At this particular time she is stuck on News Paper Reporter, as she would then have the ability to talk to be people who really matter and find out more. Then, as a perk, be able to spread the information.
Habits: Balancing pencils (chopsticks, pens, and straws) under her nose, tapping her fingers or a pen on anything and everything, shifting her eyes from one thing to another without stopping, 'word-vomitting' when nervous.
Likes: Food, Photography, Libraries, Information, Spy Movies, Detective Shows, Questioning people, and sneaking around.
Dislikes: Being out of the loop, Bloody noses, Public Speaking, Having nothing to do, Bland and flavorless food, and when people refuse to answer questions.
History: Sixteen years ago, Naoko was born as the second - and final, daughter of the Hebuno family. Her older sister, Miki was four when Naoko was brought into the world. They grew up in a middle-class family in Japan. Her parents both had decent jobs, worked as much as possible, and lived to make their two daughters happy. This was, to say the least, a very simple family. Miki became big into ballet, and soon became the Star Daughter. Naoko on the other hand slowly grew strange. While all the other children were playing games, Naoko was watching and scribbling things down in her notebooks. She read constantly, and asked lots of questions.

Over the course of her life, Naoko became fairly independent from her parents. Though they love her, and try to help whenever possible, she doesn't generally go to them for much. Miki and Naoko are no longer as close as they were, but still talk quite a bit. Her family is understanding that she's not like most, and seem to have accepted Naoko whole heartedly. So, in the shortest and easiest terminology: the Hebuno children grew up and lived a very normal life. One was strange and a bit distant, and one was more friendly and lady-like. Either way, they are equally loved by their parents.

Due to that curious nature of hers, Naoko has done boat loads of research. The Library has become her favorite place, and the internet is now her best friend. Her need to know as much as possible has filled countless notebooks with notes on things from how to set the clock on a VCR to the symptoms and cures for various diseases. Through this extensive research she has spent most of her time researching governments. She became interested when talking online with a friend. This research has lead to her believe Monarchies aren't worth it. One family shouldn't be in command, as far as Naoko is concerned. Thus she has come to decide overthrowing the Queen would do Tokyo a world of good. A side effect is that she's paranoid about a lot of things. She feels the government is covering up something huge, that aliens exist, bigfoot is real, and that the Lochness Monster and Abominable Snowmen also exist.

TO TOMORROW, A SAILOR YELL

Elemental Power: Wind and Space
Transformation Sequence: Naoko puts a hand over her necklace, whispering "Hurakan Mirror Power, Make-up!" to start her transformation. She takes a hold of the small crystal the ribbon disappears. Holding the crystal up above her head, Naoko tilts her head back to watch it. Light bursts forth for a second before flickering out and dying. The sky above churns and darkens above her. Suddenly, a single tornado hits, leaving Naoko in the eye of it. She moves her hands, allowing the crystal to float above her.

Naoko’s hand protrude from the sides of the tornado and every time a blade of wind strikes it leaves another piece of her gloves. By the time this is done, she is slowly lifted off the ground, arms still sticking out of the tornado. The bottom of the tornado shrinks around her feet and slowly moves up her legs leaving more and more of her fuku. By the time it reaches her shoulders and neck her black bodice is in place. The crystal has grown by now and is station just where it should be, as a broach on the front of her bodice.

The tornado is sucked into the blue crystal and when it vanishes, another blast of light creates her collar and skirt. This flash of light also creates her bows and any other part of her fuku that was missed.
Uniform Description: N/A
Special Items: A black ribbon that is tied around her neck which features a silver charm that has two straight lines imbedded in a light blue crystal. The ribbon is made of satin and the small crystal is about the size of a dime laid in a silver base. This is her transformation item.
Attack Name: Hurakan Raging Winds
Description of Attack: Sailor Hurakan lifts her hands above her head, crossing them at her wrists – palms facing forward. The young woman gives the command and wind gathers in her open palms as mall balls of pale yellow energy. She closes her hands, curling them into fists. The energy bursts from her fingers, creating hoops of dangerous energy. Sailor Hurakan proceeds to throw these hoops rapidly, and in frantic way. These hoops are very sharp and they can rip through things.

I WILL CATCH IT, THE SAILOR STAR

Your Name: Raine
Secret Phrase: Galaxia Power, Make-Up!
Roleplaying Sample:
Naoko was a fan of that secret agent guy who was played by at least 6 different men over the course of maybe 10 or 20 movies. What was his name? Oh, yeah. James Bond! Her parents were big into that guy, or was it her grandparents? It didn’t matter, he was a pretty slick guy, handsome to boot. Naoko thought so, at least, as she mimicked his movements by pressing her back to the wall and peaking around the corner. The subject of her attention today was a new teacher. She was so curious as to who he was.

“Nao-chi, what are you doing!?” Laughed a near-by friends. Naoko turned, grabbed them and pulled them with force against the wall with her. Her hand covered their mouth and put her finger to her mouth. “Nao-chi, you’re at it again, aren’t you?” The young friend whispered, giving 'Agent' Naoko a stern look.

“Will you shut up!?” Gasping, Naoko covered her mouth, fearing she had blown what cover she had. Swiftly, the golden eyes of the young girl peaked around the corner, finding the young teacher hadn’t heard the outburst. “I’m trying to find out who that is!” Naoko said dragging her friend’s face around the corner, pointing at the teacher.

“Nao-Chi. That’s Mr. Tsubame! He’s a student teacher from Tokyo U.” Naoko’s friend sighed, shaking her head with a roll of her eyes. Patting Naoko’s shoulder, the young girl walked off, rejoining her previous group of friends. The topic had switched to Naoko and her odd little habits. “Silly Nao-Chi. She’s back at her stalking.”

“I’m not stalking him!” Naoko screamed, hands on hips. That had to have given away her position, the young teen gasped and scurried quickly down the hall. Just as she turned into the safety of the girls bathroom the young teacher peaked around the corner curiously. Naoko, or Nao-chi to her friends, would live to ‘hunt’ another day.

[Wakahisa Meido]

Jul 18, 2009 16:59:03 GMT -5 Hebuno Naoko said:

GIVE SADNESS A SAILOR SMILE

We don't want it anymore,
I believe that you can change it,
Even in the darkness.

BRING A MIRACLE, A SAILOR WING

Character Name: Hebuno Naoko
Name Meaning: Honest Child of Heaven
Senshi/Shitennou Name: Sailor Hurakan
Age: 16
Birthdate: June 1st

EVERYONE CARRIES A SHINING STAR

Personality: Naoko is very lively when she is with her friends. She has a good deal of energy that naturally flows through her. There appears to be some kind of happiness to her, though some try and say she is forcing herself into it. Naoko’s theory is ‘Be as free as the Sky’. That’s why she tries to have as much fun as possible when she is with people she knows and loves. To anyone outside of her friends, she comes off as sneaky and kind of creepy. This little lady tends to keep everything about herself hush-hush. She'll walk around with her mouth shut, and her eyes going everywhere. And when it comes to meeting new people she's either very excited about it or acts very nervous (generally around good looking men).

Naturally curious, Naoko will ask as many questions as possible. She tends to want to know the way the world works and why. With her curiosity she can even get herself into trouble, and does quite often. If someone interests her, she will either put him or her under surveillance or just pester him or her a little. One of the people who just has to know what’s going on it wouldn’t be strange to see her standing ‘innocently’ by a bunch of gossiping girls. This adds to the creepy-sneaky scene the girl is into. She knows no bounds and will ask any question that comes to mind.

Speaking in front of a classroom is a no-no. Naoko would freak out and be launched into a panic attack. If they’re her friends, she’s fine. But if she doesn’t know at least half the people, Naoko tends to get nervous and stutter. Which is odd because she can be in the back of the class, get yelled at for sleeping, and make a joke about it with ease. However, being in front of everyone…the absolute center of attention drives her a little bonkers.

Naoko is one of those girls who can miraculously fit in with just about any crowd. Why? Because she’s a people watcher, that’s why. She knows what certain ‘groups’ of people expect from fellow members. She tends to be able to blend in rather easily and can easily get along with people if they agree with her. Naoko is one of those young ladies who gets labeled a ‘Social Butterfly’ quite often. It’s more like ‘Floaterby’ because she goes from one ‘clique’ to the other as often as she damn well pleases. All of this is for the sake of learning and knowing more and more about the world and the people in it.

Because of who she is and what she does, Naoko is very versatile. She can be a great many things at once and keeps herself at a neutral position on everything. She can be nice to your face and stab you in the back the next minute. She switches her sides depending on the topic. She’s not one to stay to one side permanently. In one sentence she can be speaking against something and instantly, in the middle of that same sentence, change her mind and speak for it.

You know those cheesy love novels your mom reads? That would be what Naoko reads. Even the smuttiest of novels can interest this young woman. Deep down inside she is a romantic, waiting to be let loose. Remember all those times you introduced yourself using ‘I like long walks on the beach’? Well, she literally means them. A young woman who dreams of a passionate love affair, and has failed at a few, that’s what Naoko is. Naoko is a bit of a pervert thanks to these novels. Encountering handsome young men triggers her to have daydreams of them making dramatic confessions of love, her and the boy in a passionate embrass, and various other fantasies - most of which bring on massive nose bleeds or cause her to space out.

Due to that curious nature of hers, Naoko has done boat loads of research. The Library has become her favorite place, and the internet is now her best friend. Her need to know as much as possible has filled countless notebooks with notes on things from how to set the clock on a VCR to the symptoms and cures for various diseases. Through this extensive research she has spent most of her time researching governments. She became interested when talking online with a friend. This research has lead to her believe Monarchies aren't worth it. One family shouldn't be in command, as far as Naoko is concern. Thus she has come to decide overthrowing the Queen would do Tokyo a world of good. A side effect is that she's paranoid about a lot of things. She feels the government is covering up something huge, that aliens exist, bigfoot is real, and that the Lochness Monster and Abominable Snowmen also exist.

And, for the record, she doesn't know she's a senshi yet. She has no clue. Sailaor Hurakan has yet to bubble to the surface. However, with all the recent senshi action going on, she is starting to feel the pull of her otherself.

Physical Appearance: N/A
Strengths: Photogrpahy, Gathering information, Sneaking around, Researching, Keeping notes, Curiousity, and People Watching.
Weaknesses: Curiousity (bit too curious sometimes), No personal boundries, Stage-fright, Creepy (it does freak people out), and Daydreaming (she gets TOO into her daydreams).
Dreams: The typical 16-year-old girl, Naoko has no clue as to what she wants to do. She has no idea, none what so ever, to be perfectly honest about it. She’s debated being a surgeon, a news paper reporter, an anchorwoman, and a pilot. At this particular time she is stuck on News Paper Reporter, as she would then have the ability to talk to be people who really matter and find out more. Then, as a perk, be able to spread the information.
Habits: Balancing pencils (chopsticks, pens, and straws) under her nose, tapping her fingers or a pen on anything and everything, shifting her eyes from one thing to another without stopping, 'word-vomitting' when nervous.
Likes: Food, Photography, Libraries, Information, Spy Movies, Detective Shows, Questioning people, and sneaking around.
Dislikes: Being out of the loop, Bloody noses, Public Speaking, Having nothing to do, Bland and flavorless food, and when people refuse to answer questions.
History: Sixteen years ago, Naoko was born as the second - and final, daughter of the Hebuno family. Her older sister, Miki was four when Naoko was brought into the world. They grew up in a middle-class family in Japan. Her parents both had decent jobs, worked as much as possible, and lived to make their two daughters happy. This was, to say the least, a very simple family. Miki became big into ballet, and soon became the Star Daughter. Naoko on the other hand slowly grew strange. While all the other children were playing games, Naoko was watching and scribbling things down in her notebooks. She read constantly, and asked lots of questions.

Over the course of her life, Naoko became fairly independent from her parents. Though they love her, and try to help whenever possible, she doesn't generally go to them for much. Miki and Naoko are no longer as close as they were, but still talk quite a bit. Her family is understanding that she's not like most, and seem to have accepted Naoko whole heartedly. So, in the shortest and easiest terminology: the Hebuno children grew up and lived a very normal life. One was strange and a bit distant, and one was more friendly and lady-like. Either way, they are equally loved by their parents.

TO TOMORROW, A SAILOR YELL

Elemental Power: Wind and Space
Transformation Sequence: Naoko puts a hand over her necklace, whispering "Hurakan Mirror Power, Make-up!" to start her transformation. She takes a hold of the small crystal the ribbon disappears. Holding the crystal up above her head, Naoko tilts her head back to watch it. Light bursts forth for a second before flickering out and dying. The sky above churns and darkens above her. Suddenly, a single tornado hits, leaving Naoko in the eye of it. She moves her hands, allowing the crystal to float above her.

Naoko’s hand protrude from the sides of the tornado and every time a blade of wind strikes it leaves another piece of her gloves. By the time this is done, she is slowly lifted off the ground, arms still sticking out of the tornado. The bottom of the tornado shrinks around her feet and slowly moves up her legs leaving more and more of her fuku. By the time it reaches her shoulders and neck her black bodice is in place. The crystal has grown by now and is station just where it should be, as a broach on the front of her bodice.

The tornado is sucked into the blue crystal and when it vanishes, another blast of light creates her collar and skirt. This flash of light also creates her bows and any other part of her fuku that was missed.
Uniform Description: N/A
Special Items: A black ribbon that is tied around her neck which features a silver charm that has two straight lines imbedded in a light blue crystal. The ribbon is made of satin and the small crystal is about the size of a dime laid in a silver base. This is her transformation item.
Attack Name: Hurakan Raging Winds
Description of Attack: Sailor Hurakan lifts her hands above her head, crossing them at her wrists – palms facing forward. The young woman gives the command and wind gathers in her open palms as mall balls of pale yellow energy. She closes her hands, curling them into fists. The energy bursts from her fingers, creating hoops of dangerous energy. Sailor Hurakan proceeds to throw these hoops rapidly, and in frantic way. These hoops are very sharp and they can rip through things.

I WILL CATCH IT, THE SAILOR STAR

Your Name: Raine
Secret Phrase: Galaxia Power, Make-Up!
Roleplaying Sample:
Naoko was a fan of that secret agent guy who was played by at least 6 different men over the course of maybe 10 or 20 movies. What was his name? Oh, yeah. James Bond! Her parents were big into that guy, or was it her grandparents? It didn’t matter, he was a pretty slick guy, handsome to boot. Naoko thought so, at least, as she mimicked his movements by pressing her back to the wall and peaking around the corner. The subject of her attention today was a new teacher. She was so curious as to who he was.

“Nao-chi, what are you doing!?” Laughed a near-by friends. Naoko turned, grabbed them and pulled them with force against the wall with her. Her hand covered their mouth and put her finger to her mouth. “Nao-chi, you’re at it again, aren’t you?” The young friend whispered, giving 'Agent' Naoko a stern look.

“Will you shut up!?” Gasping, Naoko covered her mouth, fearing she had blown what cover she had. Swiftly, the golden eyes of the young girl peaked around the corner, finding the young teacher hadn’t heard the outburst. “I’m trying to find out who that is!” Naoko said dragging her friend’s face around the corner, pointing at the teacher.

“Nao-Chi. That’s Mr. Tsubame! He’s a student teacher from Tokyo U.” Naoko’s friend sighed, shaking her head with a roll of her eyes. Patting Naoko’s shoulder, the young girl walked off, rejoining her previous group of friends. The topic had switched to Naoko and her odd little habits. “Silly Nao-Chi. She’s back at her stalking.”

“I’m not stalking him!” Naoko screamed, hands on hips. That had to have given away her position, the young teen gasped and scurried quickly down the hall. Just as she turned into the safety of the girls bathroom the young teacher peaked around the corner curiously. Naoko, or Nao-chi to her friends, would live to ‘hunt’ another day.

Thank you for your interest in Shattered Kingdom!

The one big thing I'd like to touch upon is the length of the personality section. At this time--and I know this is painful--it'd be good to see you condense some of the key points and reorganize it a little more. We've noticed in the past that too much established detail in the profile sometimes causes problems, and definitely don't want to see be troublesome for you.

Some of that is actually going to be easy to accomplish, I notice you have a good bit of history regarding her current activities in researching the monarchy, for example.

[Hebuno Naoko]

Alright, so I did some editing to her personality/history sections. A good charge of things have been omitted or moved. I'm pretty sure that addresses the aforementioned problem. I bet you'll be able to see the changes on your own as soon as you look at the application.

[King Helios]

Mmm, nope. Not seeing it.













No, seriously? I don't seem to notice anything else I'd recommend tweaking, just be patient with us until Rissa comes back to weigh in.

[Administration]

I don't see anything else that needs to be fixed. Accepted!